Sabtu, 20 Juni 2009

my idol

My idol is Hanah Montana. I like her because she is beautiful and smart girl. Hanah Montana's job isactor and singer. She has beautiful voice. Hanah Montana is multitalented person because she can acting and singing. Hanah Montana is international actor. I like Hanah Montana voice so much,my mom like Hanah Montana too. After lunch i always listen Hanah Montana cassete and i also watch Hanah Montana's movie. I usually watch Hanah Montana's movie with my mom,bit my sister don't like her. After school i always reading magazine about Hanah Montana. I usually read magazine in bedroom. Hanah Montana live in America. Hanah Montana has two brothers

1 komentar:

  1. It's great tiza...
    may be...you can make a correction....
    I always reading > I always read...you may use the subject pronoun (not use Hanah montana...in all your senteces)

    BalasHapus